classic waka stream

春霞はかなくたちて別るとも
風より外に誰か訪ふべき
Roma-ji

Harugasumi hakanaku tachite wakaru tomo kaze yori hoka ni tare ka toubeki

English Translation
Like the haze of spring
that rises and fades away,
though you leave me so,
who but the wind, tell me,
would come to call on you
Meaning
Even if you leave me, rising and drifting away like the spring haze, who but the wind would come to call on you?
Commentary
Book Thirteen Love Poems V 929

Headnote: "Topic unknown."
The poet says that even if the beloved rises and departs like spring haze, who but the wind would come to call. Likening the departing one to spring haze and himself to the wind that blows toward it, he says that wherever she goes, he alone will come to her.
The next poem, 930, is Ise's reply, taking up the words haze and wind to form an exchange.
The poet is listed as anonymous, and the composer's name has not come down to us. The main text gives the poet as "yomibito mo," which indicates that the composer is unknown.

The first line, "Harugasumi," means "spring haze," standing for the one who leaves.
The second line, "hakanaku tachite," means "rising frailly," with "tatsu" joining haze rising and setting out on a journey.
The third line, "wakaru tomo," means "even if you part from me," with "tomo" a conjunctive particle of concessive supposition.
The fourth line, "kaze yori hoka ni," means "other than the wind," the poet likening himself to the wind that visits the haze.
The last line, "tare ka toubeki," means "who would come? no one," with "ka" a rhetorical binding particle closed by the attributive "beki."
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Gosen Wakashu
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