classic waka stream

あしひきの山の山菅やまずのみ
見ねば恋しき君にもあるかな
Roma-ji

Ashihiki no yama no yamasuge yamazu nomi mineba koishiki kimi ni mo aru kana

English Translation
Upon the mountain,
foot-wearying, the sedge grows,
never ceasing so,
when I do not see you, how
I long for you, my beloved.
Meaning
Like the sedge upon the mountain, never ceasing, how I long for you whenever I cannot see you.
Commentary
Book Thirteen Love Poems III 780

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown"
Taking up the sound of the mountain sedge, the poem says, "how unceasingly I long for you when I do not see you." Through the echo of "yamasuge" and "yamazu," it moves from the preface to its theme, expressing a longing that swells without pause.

First line, "ashihiki no," is a pillow word modifying "yama," mountain, the fourth in the sequence beginning "ashihiki no."
Second line, "yama no yamasuge," means "the mountain sedge of the mountain." The first and second lines form a preface that, by repeating the same sounds, leads to "yamazu" in the third line.
Third line, "yamazu nomi," means "unceasingly," echoing the sound of "yamasuge."
Fourth line, "mineba koishiki," means "longed for when not seen," with "ne" the perfective form of the negative "zu" and "ba" marking a fixed condition.
Final line, "kimi ni mo aru kana," means "such are you," with "kana" exclamatory.
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Shui Wakashu
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