classic waka stream

あやにくにしるくも月の宿るかな
夜にまぎれてと思ふ袂に
Roma-ji

Ayaniku ni shiruku mo tsuki no yadoru kana yo ni magirete to omou tamoto ni

English Translation
Spitefully, how clear
the moon has come to lodge
for all to see,
in these sleeves where I had thought
to hide my tears in the night!
Meaning
How spitefully clear the moon lodges in my sleeves, just where I thought to hide my tears in the darkness of night!
Commentary
Love Poems 638

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "The moon"
The poet meant to weep unseen under cover of the night, yet the moon is reflected all too clearly in his tear-wet sleeves, making his tears all the more conspicuous. The poem catches the irony of moonlight laying bare the tears of a secret love.

First line, “ayaniku ni”: unluckily, as if out of spite.
Second line, “shiruku mo tsuki no”: shirushi is distinct, clear to see; this answers the topic.
Third line, “yadoru kana”: kana is exclamatory; the poem breaks after the third line.
Fourth line, “yo ni magirete to”: meaning to hide my tears in the darkness of night.
Fifth line, “omou tamoto ni”: in the sleeves where I meant to do so, returning in inversion to yadoru in the third line.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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