classic waka stream

あだに葺く草の庵のあはれより
袖に露置く大原の里
Roma-ji

Ada ni fuku kusa no iori no aware yori sode ni tsuyu oku ōhara no sato

English Translation
From the sorrow of
my hut of grass, so roughly
thatched against the sky,
dew comes settling on my sleeves
in the village of Ōhara.
Meaning
From the sorrow of living in a roughly thatched grass hut, dew settles on my sleeves here in the village of Ōhara.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1213

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Reply"
The sixth of Jakunen's ten. From the sorrow of a carelessly thatched grass hut, dew settles on his sleeves in Ōhara.
The poor hut that cannot keep out rain and dew is laid over the dew of tears on his sleeves, the dew leaking through the thatch and the tears of sorrow becoming one. Like the moss mat of Saigyō's 1201, it sings of the humble dwellings of mountain villages.

First line, “ada ni fuku”: carelessly thatched.
Second line, “kusa no iori no”: of the grass-thatched hut.
Third line, “aware yori”: from its sorrow.
Fourth line, “sode ni tsuyu oku”: dew on my sleeves, echoing tears.
Fifth line, “ōhara no sato”: ending on a noun, the last line shared by the series.
Author
Jakuzen
Source
Sankashu
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